Comments on: LOL Essays: Topic #1, Submission #3 http://learnoutlive.com/lol-essays-topic-1-submission-3/    wherever you are . . . Mon, 07 May 2012 15:22:43 +0000 hourly 1 By: Jeremiah Bourquehttp://learnoutlive.com/lol-essays-topic-1-submission-3/comment-page-1/#comment-888 Jeremiah Bourque Wed, 28 Jul 2010 22:18:58 +0000 http://learnoutlive.com/?p=3347#comment-888 Sorry for the late reply. In general, this essay is unacceptable. It has many problems. It would not pass any test.The problems can be solved. They are not hopeless. But, the writer needs to learn more about how English essays need to be written, and to apply that knowledge.I try to focus on the positive: improving what already exists and making writing stronger. Sorry for the late reply. In general, this essay is unacceptable. It has many problems. It would not pass any test.

The problems can be solved. They are not hopeless. But, the writer needs to learn more about how English essays need to be written, and to apply that knowledge.

I try to focus on the positive: improving what already exists and making writing stronger.

]]> By: MONAhttp://learnoutlive.com/lol-essays-topic-1-submission-3/comment-page-1/#comment-884 MONA Wed, 21 Jul 2010 20:56:18 +0000 http://learnoutlive.com/?p=3347#comment-884 Okay, In general Is it good or no? I spend alot of time learning English by myself. you dont know how Iam tired from learning. Please give me hint or anything help me. Okay, In general Is it good or no? I spend alot of time learning English by myself. you dont know how Iam tired from learning. Please give me hint or anything help me.

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